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Group Critique

Creativity -


  • The objects are all random, but the earphones connect them all together.


Manipulation -

  • The rim of the bottles whites are very good 
  • the earphones and shadowing behind in the bottle is really good
  • Variety in shades and shapes 
  • Within the shadow there's shade 
  • White is used sparingly  
Problem Solving -


  • Shows that it took time to work on my piece since I did the bumps on the bottle and the plastic bag



Presentation -


  • Good variety in tones and shades


Self Assessment

Creativity -B

Manipulation - B

Problem Solving - B

Presentation - B



                           

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